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    The Poem is done come and read it!

    [FONT="Comic Sans MS"]

    Howdy all in cainslair!

    The poems is done. Btw i my not say all in the poem, if so i'am sorry.
    But when you read it and it says "Cainslair that is all of you" so in a way i do say you! and i hope is ok.

    The Title "CainsLair" was written between 2/11 - 22/11 - 2008 By Toryu72

    The world flame right through your computer
    a day with my arms of buddy's
    in cainslair we fought and die together
    there was some winning and losses
    but it's war can't change the pass
    no matter what you think
    oh i can't read your mind
    when Murphy and his gunship
    stay away from it
    don't get in the way
    it could kill you
    death from above
    make a run through a empty space
    take my WZ-10 and make some terror on the enemy
    with my co-pilot Fireydragon the gunner
    and fly away into cruel red dawn
    got knifed by K Phantom
    i'am so good at that
    to be knifed from behind
    what if we lived without war
    what if there was no war
    there should be no games about war
    there should be no movies about war
    just see her smile into my eyes
    flower on the ground
    there is peace suddenly
    there is war suddenly
    you ship out to distance of land
    there you run for your own life
    into arms you carry a sniper rifle
    Reconsnipe1 so happy that he laughing all the time
    i don't laughing when he shot me in the head
    i was wasted into the sky
    falling into darkness of war
    what now Todd98 in Fallout 3
    hey come to us in BF2
    Pidgeot Girl she is here too
    blackarrow in black hawk
    with cain just flying
    to pick up others in cainslair
    Apache Warrior and his AH-12 Cobra
    send his heat seek missiles into a tank
    Major Massacre not so happy
    see his tank got blow up
    was about to take it to late now
    what if we lived without war
    what if there was no war
    Trooper110 and his squad
    capture a checkpoint
    you think victory
    oh no with a mass of armed force coming to you
    a warning from commander holy-h@nd-gr3ande
    into fury of flame
    when the sky turns into darkness
    it's a bomb from the sky
    fight to the last man or woman
    what if we lived without war
    what if there was no war
    just peace and quite
    a color of red banner rising in the east
    feel the shock wave
    spread over the world
    BF2 with cainslair
    BF2142 with cainslair
    we still fighting
    Crysis wars time to be in cloak mode
    can you see me now?
    opps you died
    Day of defeat was an defeat for you
    or was it an victory
    COD4 the high tech of war
    COD5 back to the pass
    an BANZI CHARGE against you
    don't flee stand your ground
    everyone in cainslair
    we fought and won and lose
    we died together
    we march to new games
    and there we bring the flame too
    one day the peace will come
    not now for many years to come
    flame rising in your eyes
    a cruel day with many lost lifes
    a cruel night there was some who made it
    like Nailik, Lady-mgs
    Dr.Box just take his laptop and paint something new
    hey Hammy said to Dr.Box
    there is no time for it
    take your gear and fight
    Vito sneak up on an enemy
    Minerva shooting and got many
    then wake me up from the dead
    she is an medic
    who saves us all in cainslair
    what if we lived without war
    what if there was no war
    what if there was just peace
    but dream on
    when this poem is almost over
    what else shall i write
    all of cainslair wonderful people
    always good to play with
    you come for the game
    but you stay for the people like me
    and the others too
    Cain rules over us all
    we stay for him
    we like to hang out with you
    flame around the world
    flame in her eyes
    flame and see the end
    flame in war time
    no matter what i will be there for you
    time goes by you
    what if there was no war
    what if there was just peace
    in her eyes the world shine
    light the sky
    see an better world
    what if there was no war
    what if there was just peace
    there should not be no flame at all
    this is for you
    this poem is for you all in cainslair
    those name i have not write it down
    when i write cainslair is all of you
    if i had write all of you
    it will be a long poem
    what if there was no war
    what if there was just peace
    what if there was no war
    what if there was just peace

    That was all..
    Hmm i will publish more other poetry.
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

    #2
    Very nice and very creative. 10/10 from me. Keep up the good work it was very entertaining to read and remember the good old days.

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      #3
      Excellent!

      I like the twists, Toryu72! A "day without war" indeed...maybe some day, if people wise up. It is funny that these fighting games have brought so many of us together...

      Anyway, ! Very nice!

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        #4
        6

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          #5
          I read the first half (What can I say? I writing stories as we speak...) But I'll give it a 9/10 so far.

          Also: Look for my group Writer's gathering i think.... gotta get the dust off that thing as well

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            #6
            that's pretty awesome Tor.
            I like it
            10/10

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              #7
              Originally posted by thedeadlyassassin View Post
              Very nice and very creative. 10/10 from me. Keep up the good work it was very entertaining to read and remember the good old days.
              Thank you the deadlyassasinn and thx for the 10 too
              Yeah those days ahhh..


              Originally posted by Skud View Post
              I like the twists, Toryu72! A "day without war" indeed...maybe some day, if people wise up. It is funny that these fighting games have brought so many of us together...

              Anyway, ! Very nice!

              Thank you Skud ..Well yeah dose days we are gonna wait for it..
              Yupp soon i hope wise up as you said
              True..Hey see playing games with each other..it's fun

              Originally posted by [BOS]2_Wycked View Post
              6
              Thank you [BOS]2_Wycked and for the 6 nice!

              Originally posted by Hunter_Killer View Post
              I read the first half (What can I say? I writing stories as we speak...) But I'll give it a 9/10 so far.

              Also: Look for my group Writer's gathering i think.... gotta get the dust off that thing as well
              THank you Hunter Killer and for the 9 too ..I shall check it out the group i mean! I like your story

              Originally posted by {CLR} Naillik View Post
              that's pretty awesome Tor.
              I like it
              10/10
              THank you {CLR} Naillik and for the 10 too

              Wish i could take you all in the poem..names and that oh well..next time then..
              Thank you all
              [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

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                #8
                1/10 for the one time you mentioned me

                I feel hurt.

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                  #9
                  I mentioned you all the time "CainsLair" but 1 will do too...thx K Phantom
                  [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

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                    #10
                    Originally posted by Toryu72 View Post
                    [FONT="Comic Sans MS"]

                    Howdy all in cainslair!

                    The poems is done. Btw i my not say all in the poem, if so i'am sorry.
                    But when you read it and it says "Cainslair that is all of you" so in a way i do say you! and i hope is ok.

                    The Title "CainsLair" was written between 2/11 - 22/11 - 2008 By Toryu72

                    The world flame right through your computer
                    a day with my arms of buddy's
                    in cainslair we fought and die together
                    there was some winning and losses
                    but it's war can't change the pass
                    no matter what you think
                    oh i can't read your mind
                    when Murphy and his gunship
                    stay away from it
                    don't get in the way
                    it could kill you
                    death from above
                    make a run through a empty space
                    take my WZ-10 and make some terror on the enemy
                    with my co-pilot Fireydragon the gunner
                    and fly away into cruel red dawn
                    got knifed by K Phantom
                    i'am so good at that
                    to be knifed from behind
                    what if we lived without war
                    what if there was no war
                    there should be no games about war
                    there should be no movies about war
                    just see her smile into my eyes
                    flower on the ground
                    there is peace suddenly
                    there is war suddenly
                    you ship out to distance of land
                    there you run for your own life
                    into arms you carry a sniper rifle
                    Reconsnipe1 so happy that he laughing all the time
                    i don't laughing when he shot me in the head
                    i was wasted into the sky
                    falling into darkness of war
                    what now Todd98 in Fallout 3
                    hey come to us in BF2
                    Pidgeot Girl she is here too
                    blackarrow in black hawk
                    with cain just flying
                    to pick up others in cainslair
                    Apache Warrior and his AH-12 Cobra
                    send his heat seek missiles into a tank
                    Major Massacre not so happy
                    see his tank got blow up
                    was about to take it to late now
                    what if we lived without war
                    what if there was no war
                    Trooper110 and his squad
                    capture a checkpoint
                    you think victory
                    oh no with a mass of armed force coming to you
                    a warning from commander holy-h@nd-gr3ande
                    into fury of flame
                    when the sky turns into darkness
                    it's a bomb from the sky
                    fight to the last man or woman
                    what if we lived without war
                    what if there was no war
                    just peace and quite
                    a color of red banner rising in the east
                    feel the shock wave
                    spread over the world
                    BF2 with cainslair
                    BF2142 with cainslair
                    we still fighting
                    Crysis wars time to be in cloak mode
                    can you see me now?
                    opps you died
                    Day of defeat was an defeat for you
                    or was it an victory
                    COD4 the high tech of war
                    COD5 back to the pass
                    an BANZI CHARGE against you
                    don't flee stand your ground
                    everyone in cainslair
                    we fought and won and lose
                    we died together
                    we march to new games
                    and there we bring the flame too
                    one day the peace will come
                    not now for many years to come
                    flame rising in your eyes
                    a cruel day with many lost lifes
                    a cruel night there was some who made it
                    like Nailik, Lady-mgs
                    Dr.Box just take his laptop and paint something new
                    hey Hammy said to Dr.Box
                    there is no time for it
                    take your gear and fight
                    Vito sneak up on an enemy
                    Minerva shooting and got many
                    then wake me up from the dead
                    she is an medic
                    who saves us all in cainslair
                    what if we lived without war
                    what if there was no war
                    what if there was just peace
                    but dream on
                    when this poem is almost over
                    what else shall i write
                    all of cainslair wonderful people
                    always good to play with
                    you come for the game
                    but you stay for the people like me
                    and the others too
                    Cain rules over us all
                    we stay for him
                    we like to hang out with you
                    flame around the world
                    flame in her eyes
                    flame and see the end
                    flame in war time
                    no matter what i will be there for you
                    time goes by you
                    what if there was no war
                    what if there was just peace
                    in her eyes the world shine
                    light the sky
                    see an better world
                    what if there was no war
                    what if there was just peace
                    there should not be no flame at all
                    this is for you
                    this poem is for you all in cainslair
                    those name i have not write it down
                    when i write cainslair is all of you
                    if i had write all of you
                    it will be a long poem
                    what if there was no war
                    what if there was just peace
                    what if there was no war
                    what if there was just peace

                    That was all..
                    Hmm i will publish more other poetry.
                    Good Stuff. It's like Christmas with all the red and green.

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                      #11
                      Nice Toryu!
                      K3BASFM. "Lead, follow, or get out of the way."
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                        #12
                        Awesome!

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                          #13
                          Originally posted by Fitty-Six K View Post
                          Good Stuff. It's like Christmas with all the red and green.
                          Thank you Fitty-Six K. Hmm yeah, not far away from Christmas a month away.


                          Originally posted by Minerva View Post
                          Nice Toryu!
                          Thank you so much Minerva.


                          Originally posted by juneau View Post
                          Awesome!

                          Thank you Juneau
                          [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

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                            #14
                            Even if I am not mentionned, I still think its a great poem!
                            Keep up the good work.
                            [this is where my funky sig would go. But I don't have one.
                            So all you get is this crappy text]

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                              #15
                              Thank you BigTwinky sorry i forget you!
                              Glad you like it
                              [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

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